OtherWorld Arata Application

So i think its safe to say that my former application was totally and utterly horrid, so I fixed a few things and well. .here we go.

First off im still trying to figure out the shading and what not but i think i did the skin a bit better than i did on the head shot(A bit more noticeable~!) 
Also, horns are bitches to draw to be honest. 


I actually really like this picture now, I don't draw men as often as women, so Im preeeetttty bad at bodies if i don't slave over it.


^{;U; He actually looks decently attractive and proportional now <3}

All critiques and comments are encouraged and appreciated, thanks~!


Arata is my character and i would appreciate people respecting this and not using this picture, or the character design anywhere(I didnt create this design, it was the lovely Lee713~!) without out my permission.

Arata is a character of WelcomeToOtherWorld 

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Name: Arata

Age:23(in looks at least)

Race: Demon

Personality:
Arata is generally kind of playful, in his own way, tinging certain things with sarcasm. however, while he can come off as jerkish, he can be quite kind and faithful. Once he finds a person, whether it be a human, another demon or on the rare case, an android, he becomes kind of obsessed and EXTREMELY protective of them.

Likes:
-Catty
-Anything pertaining to the world before it was destroyed
-watching and studying survivors
-any type of sweet stuff he can get his hands on
-COLORS

Dislikes:
-Androids
-Some demons
-backstabbers
-anyone who touches his ahem 'treasures' without his permission

Anything else:
Though he's a demon, he has small(actually its pretty bad) obsession with the world prior, as he had never seen it, he is fascinated by old mostly junk that he finds, this being from trashed and unusable vehicles, to small sentimental things, such being trinkets and even photos that survived.
He spends alot of his time moving from building to building, despite the fact that more than half contain nothing and are hazardous as well.
some of his most treasured items he owns are a hard cover book filled with pictures of the former world(probably some type of vacation book or something) A small heart key-chain(In pic) , His blue pants that he wears obviously daily(considering its not like they have fashion stores)
He's never seen any type of plant, as he came along when the chaos was near its end.
He also LOVES colorful things, anything colorful he'll love you name it. As most of the world is monochrome, he treasures mostly anything he can get his hands on that has colors(as mentioned before, an example would be his pants)
When he's not out scavenging to find stuff, he spends a good chunk of his time watching survivors from afar, one of his favorites being Catty.

He has been one of Arata's favorites for a long time now, despite his love and fascination for survivors, he's actually a bit hesitant and shy to introduce himself or make an appearance(especially around Catty)
However this doesn't make him any less likely to follow and watch Catty while he scavenges.